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Exposition : There is a decorated military general that serves the royal army in Heaven, they are quickly reaching their prime and becoming the target of many envious higher ranking military officials.
Inciting Incident : They are framed for stealing luxury goods and items from the king's own royal inventory by jealous generals and captains to get rid of them. They are then sent to a rehabilitation area on the moon for brainwashing and cleaning of impurities in the mind and soul.
Conflict : They meet a spider that can grant them access back to heaven, but they must surrender and gouge out their eyes in exchange for a ticket.
Crisis : They are beginning to become more corrupt as time goes on, as they never truly did anything wrong and the brainwashing and training proves the opposite effect on them. So they begin gouging out one of their eyes before its too alte.
Resolution : They realize the pain of the corruption is just the revelation of the fact that the system they've upheld their entire life is corrupt. They realize that instead of running back home, they should work with others on the moon to save those just like themselves from making the same mistake. (Giving their eyes to a spider, that is)
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Backup Story : A man loses his heart in an accident and gets a synthetic one, he begins going paranoid and pushing away everyone around him for fear of becoming an emotionless killer.
Backup Story : A lazy farmer fed up with the heat shoots down the sun plunging the entire world into an eternal winter.
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